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TG Caption This: turned into a little sister

Jay was a typical guy living his high school life to the best of his ability, which wasn't high, it wasn't that he was stupid he just couldn't do what academic kids could, most people weren't expecting much from him except one, his twin sister as most siblings she was annoying but deep down they were the closer than anyone would ever be. One day were he'd done particularly bad at school he kept saying half-hearted comments, such as
"I wish school didn't exist" and " I wish I could start over"
His sister heard him rant and pushed open the door
" got a problem Jay?" She asked
"Yes a big one, mum and dad are going to be pissed" he said angrily
"I wish I could start over" he said again
His sisters eyes sparked with interest
"Here take this I'm sure it can help you"
She tossed mike a cuddly teddy bear, Jay was about to laugh, another one of his sisters stupid joke, but a soon as he caught it a jolt was sent through his body, he nearly blacked out, when he was again fully aware of his surroundings he began to change.

his short, black scruffy hair, lengthened at an incredible speed, slowing down by the time it reached his mid-back, and only fully stopping its growth when it reached his butt. Then it proceeded to change to a beautiful blond, and when the hair stopped his face started to morph:
softening and getting smaller, his eyebrows thinned, his lips became fuller, eyes larger, if you only saw his face you'd clearly think he was a girl.

As the changes moved down his Adam's apple receded making his voice increase in pitch. Going on to his shoulders they became rounder and less bulky. He kept looking in astonishment as two little mounds formed on his chest increasing slowly to a decent C-cup. The changes started to accelerate as more and more surface came in contact with the change; his body reduced in size losing any fat he had' his flabby arms became silky smooth and his legs shortened while any fat he lost from his stomach and arms seemed to fill his calfs and butt.
His genitals then shrunk he let out a feminine squeal as he became officially a girl. His sister then stepped forward and hugged him
"I always wanted a sister, but I wanted her to be a younger one"

She stepped back, another jolt went through Jay, all feminine features he had gained seemed to disappear: his breasts reduced in size making her flat chested her round butt became flat as she steadily decreased in size her hair which probably had taken years to grow also shortened going back to being neck length. Everything around her seemed larger, her mind became fuzzy it soon became impossible for her to add 10+10, and this intelligence seemed to be replaced by images of her sister....

"Come on Jess let's go play"
"Yeah! pray, pray" Jess shouted, her little baby brain attempted to say the words correctly.
"Ah who's a smart little girl? You'll do much better. You've had a new chance....
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thanks for reading
(might have rushed the writing a bit )
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Grandiaplayer Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015
Very nice! I like that it from boy to girl then to young girl.
MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome job
sallyane Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
oh wow what a great sister brilliant can i have the bear
naminenam Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I wish I had that teddy bear :(
grimriper75 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student
kyoshira71 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
Nice job on the story, I liked the cute ending.
MikotoWolfskin Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I very much enjoyed your short story and take on the concepts thanks so much for writing this for me. :) I like that you first wrote the transgender from guy to girl and then the regression. If I where to give any criticism it be add more lengthy explain on age regression process. Otherwise you did great, its not perfect in grammar, but works out nicely as is :) Again thanks for writing it.
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Dude8641 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
I've added dots comas and improved the paragraphing with an update which I hope improves the text
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